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zidane21
June 14th, 2005, 02:24 AM
Here's a wallpaper I made. Let me know what you think.

click (http://home.pacbell.net/dm11/nerves.htm)

Jeff Wheeler
June 14th, 2005, 02:28 AM
It's good, and I like it, but I can't really find a single thing to focus on, it's sort of like everything is grabbing your attention. I can't read anything because everything else is begging for attention...

Also, it's not big enough and I don't think icons would really fit on any spot there :(

Cool graphics though :)

squan
June 14th, 2005, 03:43 AM
Cool, and original!

The only thing you might wanna change is that sharp arrow above the text, it doesn't quite go along with the style of the rest of the wallpaper.

G
June 14th, 2005, 07:01 AM
I really like it the artwork is something different from the "norm", the text is a ;little hard to read but I'm guessing that this is purely cosmetic anyways :)

zidane21
June 14th, 2005, 01:12 PM
Thanks for the feedback!

I was thinking the same thing about the arrow, but then figured it was close enough to the circles (above the arrow) that there would be some kind of continuity there. I'll experiment with some different style for it though.