personal dynamic gallery and chiropractic site

[wakeup]

2 sites im working on

==gallery site in here== (http://www.lesleyandalangallery.com)
intro animation has been sped up just not uloaded yet.



==chiro site in here== (http://www.twenty-eleven.com/theWebsite13.html)
the text layout/scheme will be as in the "clinic" section. ignore the rest.

all comments greatfully accepted!!!

[unchew]

Welcome to the forums!!!

I like the letter effects of the intro... good job!

[wakeup]

been meaning to join for ages!!


was also interested to see how many browsers the transparent flash works in. its in the bottom left of the gallery site. if u see white its not working!!!

and in the chiro site, does the preloader show up at 0% or at about 40% as on my comp??

thanks people

the newbie!!

[the_transporter]

For the flash intro on this site http://www.lesleyandalangallery.com/, maybe you can speed it up just a bit incase people would actually want to watch it (instead of clicking skip)

For http://www.twenty-eleven.com/theWebsite11.html, I found your logo moving slowly in the background to be a bit distracting. Maybe set the alpha to be a bit lower. I found my eyes shifting in response to its motion while reading the content on the site.

Otherwise, both sites are good.

[wakeup]

thx, yes i have made a new intro to the gallery site that is faster.

had the BG logo transparency down before but the client asked it to be as is. will try to "suggest" the lower transparency again!!!

thx for the comments

[Tomaz]

the black font is hardly readable in chiro site, gallery is nice ;)

[RabBell]

ok........

in your gallery site you need to really speed up that movie, but at the same time I honestly don't think it's doing anything for the site. It's slow and uninteresting and I think speeding it up isn't going to help...I'd remove it completely, either do without one or go back to the drawing board on the movie. Words in a preloading movie never looks good unless you do something like this with it

http://www.webfeatsdesign.com/wf5/v5f.html
for best results, click the broadband option when it appears and view the intro

if you're intro isn't going to do anything for your site, why have one :huh:

The actual site looks good but I'm not a big fan of the light blue background. Maybe a grey/silver or something darker would be better.

in the chiro site you need to stop that logo from moving in the background and change the font to white in all pages, in some it's black and too hard to read. To be honest looking at the site I don't know why you decided to do it with flash, you could have done this site in HTML....

:cool:

[wakeup]

ok, chiro site has been changed....

gallery- agree with the intro and blue BG points. will upload new version soon.

yes have been thinking that i could have done in html with just a flash banner, but all well and good in hinesight!! will not be so rash to go 100% flash in future. !!

[Detch Boy]

just centre the second site...kinda like it...suits a chiropractor...nice movement, colours, info, nav.

[wakeup]

gallery BG changed=)

how many of you can see the white in the gallery, bottom left, flash contact to twenty-eleven??? seems that transparent flash only works in a few browsers!!