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sebus
May 25th, 2005, 09:37 AM
creating a new logo for hearmyhouse.com
here are some concepts, any of them good ?
http://www.hearmyhouse.com/houselogos.jpg

LoungeActx
May 25th, 2005, 09:55 AM
Personally, I think the top one is the best. I would try some different fonts with it though. Try a sans-serif font and see how that looks? Good job! :azn:

billystar
May 25th, 2005, 09:57 AM
bottom one as a starting point....

imported_FlashFish
May 25th, 2005, 10:54 AM
I agree, the bottom one. I also agree, go sans serif. Obviously you aer wanting the house to be rough looking and sketchy, but it is just too scrappy at the moment. There is a differenece between sketchy and scrappy. I'd neaten up the lines a little and replace the flash strokes with shapes instead. Actually.....more like this.

sebus
May 25th, 2005, 11:12 AM
it's not done in flash, but illustrator and the strokes kind of look too japanese/chinese

imported_FlashFish
May 25th, 2005, 11:18 AM
that's true. just wanted to illustrate what i meant by scrappy and that it should be less crooked. Whatever program you used, i think your strokes are too perfect and recognisable. Nice concept though.

j_polo9
May 25th, 2005, 11:33 AM
It's a start! I like the antenna and sound waves idea. Get rid of the stroke on the font. Maybe use something like trajan. And try some other fonts also.

simplistik
May 25th, 2005, 11:56 AM
Obviously you aer wanting the house to be rough looking and sketchy, but it is just too scrappy at the moment.
Obviously hu? "Concept" generally means a general idea or a plan... which would lead you to believe that it's not a finalized graphic... these all look like rough sketches to me... that's just me though :P

Anyway... last one is the way to go, to start, if you're wanting to go w/ one of these. And I also think you could go either Serif or SanSerif... either one will work well... depends on what you want to accomplish and how you do it. The effect you have goin w/ the text though is definately not a good direction to go.

sebus
May 25th, 2005, 12:10 PM
can some of you, actually as many as possible go to www.hearmyhouse.com and tell me if the intro audio or any of the samples cut in and out ?? My boss says they are and yet i tested at home and my brother's DSL and they sound perfect. Again I told my boss it's his server and the crappy T1 line they have. thanks !

MetteBB
May 25th, 2005, 12:18 PM
All i can say is this... My speakers were up too loud and I jumped ou of my seat when the guy started talking... It started very [all of a sudden]* in lack of a better word.
*phew... trying to breath normally :lol:

I likes the links on the page (like the for sale signs...)but that has nothing to do with your question. Sorry :)

/mette

sebus
May 25th, 2005, 12:20 PM
my boss says the flash intro audio keeps cutting in and out, can you guys tell me if that's happening on your system also ?

booler
May 25th, 2005, 03:20 PM
sounds fine to me

fiyasurv
May 25th, 2005, 03:44 PM
No problems with sounds here

sebus
May 25th, 2005, 03:53 PM
cool thx

BoonDock
May 25th, 2005, 03:54 PM
the first one or the last one ... i'd like to see some other ideas, but if you like those, then those 2 are my choice ... i agree with what has already been said ...

boon out~ :cowboy:

Tommy_S
May 25th, 2005, 03:57 PM
Am I the only one who don't like any of them (logos)? :hat:

BoonDock
May 25th, 2005, 04:13 PM
Nah, I suggested that he try to do some more ;)

simplistik
May 25th, 2005, 04:14 PM
Am I the only one who don't like any of them (logos)? :hat:A few of us don't like em... but there is a starting point in one of his logos...

sebus
May 26th, 2005, 02:13 PM
some more.. i'll work on the fonts also
http://hearmyhouse.com/myhouselogos.jpg