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Marbles
May 24th, 2005, 02:12 PM
just starting up my own site, and havnt put any content in yet... just got the opening of the site, and the display of the buttons so far... just curious as to what you all think of it from the design/asthetics standpoint

here's the site (http://tahomadesigns.com/)

webmask
May 24th, 2005, 02:27 PM
the bending line thing is ok.. but the color, the font is kinda not in place. but im not sure whats the real color scheme you have in mind.. is this grungy type? just post your updates. :glasses:

Marbles
May 24th, 2005, 02:38 PM
heh, to be honest, i really wasnt planning on any particular style yet, just kinda made the color scheme that popped into my head at the time... my other website (http://repeatoffender525.com) is almost completely the opposite, being a white theme.

if the general consensus is negative on the colors, i'll pick something else i guess :P

cant post any changes though untill i get home from work ;)

Tommy_S
May 24th, 2005, 02:42 PM
Intro? :hr: Don't like it. Fonts are mixed up.
P.S. Increase FPS.

Marbles
May 24th, 2005, 02:56 PM
ah, i bet i know why the fonts are mixed up... i didnt imbed them into flash maybe?

Stratification
May 24th, 2005, 03:02 PM
I'd change the color scheme. Grey and red just don't look that great. And I'll second the comment on raising the FPS.

Marbles
May 24th, 2005, 03:12 PM
will do, i'll up it when i get home... any idea what fps i should raise it to? 30 maybe?

[uber]
May 24th, 2005, 03:32 PM
oh yea,, 30 is good.. but the whole thing with the bounceing box is that its fast and that its whips into form... but yours looks like its in a supsension.. too slow and not very organic