Need feedback (;

[acr]

Need feedback for a portfolio im working on.
kinda just for fun, not sure to get it online.
im not sure about how everythings gonna work yet, but this is somehow the graphic is going to look like. not sure bout the picture yet.
btw everything is going to be flash animated.

tell me what you think.
thanks
[here] (http://www.depro.dk/preview.png)

[.inspire]

Nice! (-:

It looks good

[cigar]

Looks nice and simple. As people say 'the proof will be in the pudding', not much of a pudding yet (no transitions, hard to get an overall feel), but you should keep going. And I live quite close to that tube stop :).

[acr]

Looks nice and simple. As people say 'the proof will be in the pudding', not much of a pudding yet (no transitions, hard to get an overall feel), but you should keep going. And I live quite close to that tube stop :).

ty, i feel you about the pudding (: , "And I live quite close to that tube stop"
means ? (;

[imported_FlashFish]

Looks nice, but all it is is someone elses photo (correct me if I'm wrong) aligned badly on to a couple of grey boxes with wonky aligned text. It does look kinda nice but if its a design portfolio which I assume it is, most people that see it will see straight through it. Unless of course it all comes together when you flash it, but as you have no plans for it I don't think you've given yourself a lot to go on. I like the clean simple style but if I were you i'd sit down and think about how the site will work and what you're aiming for before you went any further. Good luck.

[acr]

Looks nice, but all it is is someone elses photo (correct me if I'm wrong) aligned badly on to a couple of grey boxes with wonky aligned text. It does look kinda nice but if its a design portfolio which I assume it is, most people that see it will see straight through it. Unless of course it all comes together when you flash it, but as you have no plans for it I don't think you've given yourself a lot to go on. I like the clean simple style but if I were you i'd sit down and think about how the site will work and what you're aiming for before you went any further. Good luck.

youre absolutely right, i agree with you. right after i posted it, i sat down and thought about how everything is going to work out. animation and so on. some of it, came while working on the site. so may be a bit random. this is just for fun really. i need to practice, that why im doing it.

[imported_FlashFish]

Fair enough, good start then!