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bungaloo
May 2nd, 2005, 10:42 AM
Now that I have learned more flash at my internship place I really want to make a new version of my site. I have done one image so far. Going to do the splash soon. Any critiques so far?

http://digitalangel.se/start_1.png
Tommy_S
May 2nd, 2005, 11:03 AM
Small font doesn't look its best. Letters stick to each other.




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BoonDock
May 2nd, 2005, 01:15 PM
I like the digital angel, but i don't like the small fonts, they do exactly what tommy stated! Try another font, maybe even a pixel font...who knows, play around with it.
bungaloo
May 3rd, 2005, 03:57 AM
Ok fixed the font.


http://digitalangel.se/start.png
bungaloo
May 18th, 2005, 09:39 AM
Have done a quick splash:

http://www.digitalangel.se/splash.jpg
http://www.digitalangel.se/splash2
Timmee_3styler
May 18th, 2005, 09:44 AM
i like what you have so far :)
imported_FlashFish
May 18th, 2005, 11:04 AM
I like the digital angel text a lot but it could be too simple? I think it's crying out for a small simple graphic to go with it, maybe some wings made out of binary or summat? I prefer the first font but it still shouldn't stick like it does. I like the rest a lot.
bungaloo
May 19th, 2005, 07:36 AM
I like the digital angel text a lot but it could be too simple? I think it's crying out for a small simple graphic to go with it, maybe some wings made out of binary or summat? I prefer the first font but it still shouldn't stick like it does. I like the rest a lot.

I've tried to do some wings but it didnt go so well. And the fonts, do u mean the very first font on the "enter" page and what do u mean by it sticks?
BoonDock
May 19th, 2005, 09:15 AM
Looking good, keep goin!
imported_FlashFish
May 19th, 2005, 10:35 AM
Just the same as before that the letters stick to each other. Sorry, I was a bit vague.
Sliker_Hawk
May 19th, 2005, 10:41 AM
What tommy stated for the first one, but the second one is harder to read.. I liked the first font =P. But hey.. If two people don't like such a suimple thing, then it beats one person not liking something which hardly applies.

If that makes any sense, don't hesitate to say so.

And yeah about the font in the splash sticking together, but so what? Hey, it's probably just because it's an image, and anyway, I can only see two words with that effect on them. Make sure they're not antialiased, and make sure they're not on half-pixels, that flash stupidly employs.
bungaloo
May 20th, 2005, 02:58 AM
Thanks guys for all the help :D