My second Line Art Effort

[Lunar_4u]

Hiya, here's my second effort so far, it my own not a trace so it aint as good :S. And i dont have a scanner so i had to just draw it as i felt like it lol. So tell me what ya think, and i know the eyes r big!!! thats what i wanted lol

[iLikePie]

i'm not too good with figure drawing, but something looks a bit wrong, i think maybe her shoulders are too broad.

other than that, i reckon it looks good, especially for a second effort, and without a scanner or anything

Stuart

[Lunar_4u]

Ye i been thinking sommer ain't right but couldn't put my finger on it hmmmm. But it ian't 100% finished yet i wanted some opinions so i could edit it futher :D, cheers for the feedback

[eyeinfinitude]

Not bad, but I think her hands are a bit too small and the way she's standing looks like she needs to use the restroom.

It's still good for your 2nd effort though. =)