my first flash site!

[UncleGuito]

hey kirupa guys again!

i finally got my full flash site up after weeks of work ( suspended by high school of course).

i would like you to tell me how you like it and waht to improve on

the url is here:

my site (http://klannorth.tk)

thanks for the input in advance!

[SureShot]

Cannot get it to load...?

[UncleGuito]

hey dude,

i've had other people try it too, and this has also happened to them: it has gotten stuck on the 49% preloader.

they went back later and said it worked, so you might wann atry back later

thanks

[sintax321]

1) the green was hard to look at on a grey bg but if that is your clan clolors or something i guess thats what you have to work with.

2)Don't have the word"Welcome" blink like that. It is hard on the eyes and looks bad.

3)Over all the site lacks a profesional look but this is you first full flash site and nobody is a pro right away.

It was a ncie start for a first time. The color was blah but you had some nice diesign elemnts there which show you are on the right track to learning great design.

[UncleGuito]

hey guys,

first of all to sure shot: heres a new link if ur still having trouble:

http://geocities.com/mattijoegeorge/klannorth.html

other than that, thanks for the input

yes, i am new to flash and dont have much time to work on it, but this is the best i can do right now.

those are are clan colors, but i fixed the blinking for you.

if you know of any other goof flash tutorial places that can teach cool special effects or something to make my site look more professional thatd be great

thanks!

[sintax321]

This is one of the best places i have found for tutorials. Umm actualy i don't think i've done a tutorial form any other place. I've done about 3/4 of the tuts on this site and they are some of the best you will find on the net.

[Dj.Stigma]

hey.
even though i use a pop-up for my www too, i know that many people don't like when the page opens in a new browser window. i respect the fact that it is ur first complete flash www and considering this fact, i think it's not bad but u still have a long way to go... what bothered me most was your green font. it hurt my eyes so i better closed it right away. as for your buttons, you can see that their position changes by 1 or 2 pixels during the different stages. also, your color scheme reminds me too much of aliens and space (hehe.. don't ask me why...) since there is a lot of green and black...
But all this is my opinion and i don't mean it in a bad way; i'm just trying to help you.
good luck
:)

[Lynx]

As for the first flash site, it`s not bad...

[UncleGuito]

once again,

i get good reponses and suggestions for my site,
thanks a bunch

ill take all of ur suggestions into consideration, and i look for more suggestions to come :sure:

[UncleGuito]

mike you stupid son of a b#%h!

are you f*#^in stupid or something, if you dont stop tracking me and making false accusations of someone you dont even know, someones goona puch your face through a wall some day or something cause ur a moron

[eyeinfinitude]

UncleGuito, take it easy, what happened? It's obvious Mike edited his comments out before I could read them so I don't know the whole story.


Mike It's obvious you said something that was offensive and you know it to or else you wouldn't have edited your post. If one more occurance like this happens, I will ban you.

I've been reading some of your posts and you're pushing your luck with some of them. If you're not here to help out then please don't cause any trouble and post offending comments.

[eilsoe]

and we're NOT afraid of calling in Dan either!

[lostinbeta]

What EG said. I have notice your replies on the forum lately have been pushing the limits as well. You make ignorant comments in almost all the site checks you post in. Then you say your sorry for making them. Obviously you weren't sorry at all.

There is a line between ignorant comments and constructive criticism and suggestions.

[kirupa]

Hey Mike,
Yeah, please show some consideration for members such as Guito who come here to get opinions on their site. Guito did show me the URL to a previous comment you made, and I think your comment was inappropriate and simply not necessary.

Cheers!
Kirupa :ub:

[Dj.Stigma]

sorry guys, i know this has nothing to do with Mike's stupid message, but since i actually see Kirupa himself :) posting a message (and that's the first time i actually do), just wanted to say hi and thanx for establishing such a great flash community... hehe
good luck people...

[UncleGuito]

thank you all for sticking up for me, this community is great....

[Mik3]

Hey Uncle Guito. I am truley sorry for being mean to you and beating you up. Sorry, I was being stupid and I truley regret saying what I said. I can't stop thinking about how stupid I was to post such a rude and inconsiderate was. I hope you forgive me.

-Sorry, Mike

[UncleGuito]

sure mike, it's fine.

after all, it's only a forum (or is it?) :q:

[lostinbeta]

I personally prefer term "Online Community" ;)

[phizion]

nice site, one thing that'd make it 10x better, would be if it wasn't in that tiny pop-up window :)

[dreamer]

This is what i think:
1) since its your first flash site i'll go easy on you.
2) good work on moving parts this is very improtant with flash sites. you learn this early and you will do well... i still havn't got it after 4 years of flash...
3) the design is simple.
4) very is low in graphics whcih i don;t mind.
5) colours very dull.

Rating (i said i will go easy on you)
70%

[UncleGuito]

ok, ill make all of your wishes some true, ill make IT IN THE SAME WINDOW, FULL SIZE!!!! :pope:


ill also work onm graphics if i have time, im at school right now...:scream:

[Dj.Stigma]

yes. the small window is very annoying (even though i did the same with my www, though it's a bit bigger). Your splash page doesn't look too good (sorry). maybe if you made it a little bit lighter. Also, on your www, the first button (i believe it's the 'About' one), when you go over, the animation's alignment changes and it shifts to the left so maybe you should change that.
:block: