3d bathroom

[hojo]

i made this with cinema4d for a project for school. the black above the sink is the mirror, i didnt put a wall on the other side so i could see things, so the reasons its black is just because theres nothing to reflect. i also have to add a picture inside the frame above the towell rack. tell me what you think.



http://www.error42.com/scene1.jpg

thanks :)

[reverendflash]

I like it...

I have a very hard time modeling anything...

the toilet seat looks a bit flat, maybe...

nicely done...

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[c!rYx]

It's great, I must have took you a long time...
Maybe I just say that because I have never used a 3D Prog... ;p

[eilsoe]

I suck at modelling too :(


Nice job there Hojo! :)

[hojo]

i want it to be as realistic as possible, anything there you see thats not right? lighting off? something going threw a wall? something where it shouldn't be? constructive criticism is welcome.

[ahmed]

the door knob and the paper roll arent that realisic :)

[hojo]

doh, forgot to do the door knobs, i just stuck a circle on there. the toilet paper though, what about it doesnt look real? is it too plain?

[eyeinfinitude]

Nicely done Hojo, but why is there a floating door knob? Or is that something else that looks like a door knob by the sink?

[eilsoe]

umm.. shadows? :)


I see the shades, but no shadows :)

[ahmed]

Originally posted by HoJo
the toilet paper though, what about it doesnt look real? is it too plain? it looks a bit too shiny.. i think it should be more dull :)

[dexa_007]

Nice work. Not sure I need 4 electricity plugs though? Maybe a toothbrush holder instead? Just a thought. (-:

[blah-de-blah]

yea i just noticed the floating door knob too, and i'm assuming you'd want some critizisms on your woork, so youc an improve on it. So i think you should make the door a bit wider, seems a bit to thin for me...and i thinkt he bottle at the sink should be more obvious, maybe add some more liquid inside? and the seat seems slightly flat? maybe should round it off? anyways good job!

[andr.in]

nice work! nice floating ghost-doornob! :P lol
and the door on the right is kinda wierd too but generally.. nice job!

[RenaissanceGirl]

First of all, I think it's totally fantastic! You don't see realistic 3D often around here... dozens of that abstract stuff... nothing as detail-oriented as this piece. This makes me actually interested in learning 3D!

Other than that... I pretty much concur with the comments about about the extra outlets and the door knob. The toilet paper looks fine to me, but I think if it rolled outward it would look even better and if you are really trying to be detailed, maybe add a quilted pattern. :P

[hojo]

its funny that you guys're talking about things like that becuase this is actually my bathroom, heh. the floating door knobs there because the room actually has all 4 walls with 2 doors, the other door and 2 walls are hidden, i just didnt hide the other knob. as for the door and sockets, again, its really funny to me that you'd say those because my bathroom in my house really has that. the majority of things here were modeled based on that.

i added a flower pot to the scene. its above the cabinet above the toilet. here it is if you'd like to look at it:

www.error42.com/flowers.jpg

this is for a school project also, we have to do a scene for the cars we built to race on. i chose a bathroom, thought it'd be funny to see a car drive around a toilet seat and down a sink.

[mdipi]

i loved the flowers, so realistic, but look at the soap too!

[morse]

Is this Maya?

[andr.in]

wow nice flower! awesome!



Originally said by Hojo:
made this with cinema4d for a project for school
morse: i think it's cinema 4d! ;)

[hojo]

mainly cinema4d with a little bit of photoshop for textures

[mlk]

i dont know how old this thread is but anyway if everybody's alive...

there are small details that could come in hand;
- the joints on the door
- maybe bevel the door (looks too much like a primitive)
- there are no shadow underneath the toilet seat..?
- i think you could resize the sink
- and add shadows on the wall (is it an omni / spotlight ?)

anyway im not really into cinema4d so i dont know how hard it is....

[mdipi]

Yeah the door does look a little flimsy...

[ironikart]

Looks like a high res version of Sims(-:

I like it... but it's missing some perspective. Try adjusting the width of the lens on the camera to give it a bit of depth.

[porpous2]

nice, great work