Please give me feedback on my Photographywebsite.

[safariwave]

Ok people, let me have the truth! I put this site together for my photography. It is not yet complete as you can see. All comments and criticism welcome.

www.safariwave.com (http://www.safariwave.com)

[IMJ]

The photos are great :D

A few things you could reconsider:
- font type: it's a bit to clunky for my tastes
- the two images at the bottom (the logo and the welcome) are a bit too large I think, compared to the flash site.
- the next/previous buttons dont really capture my attention. My first reaction was: where do i scroll?

[zacus]

yeh i like the size of the pics at the bottom but the flash needs to be a bit bigger, to match it, and also to spread out the menu a bit.

also try some subtle menu rollovers

[simplistik]

I would round the corners, get a serif font, and make some nice rollovers.

[b.rich]

I agree about the font, I think your site could also use some transitions between sections (search, kirupa has a tutorial on it). You might also want to consider toning down that v3 logo it looks outta place to me. I like the pictures :thumb:

[safariwave]

Ok made some changes. Got rid of the two graphics at the bottom. The fonts I'm going to keep for right now cause nothing else looks good with the layout(unless someone can specify something that will not look out of place with the whole them of the site). Will be working on the transitions pretty soon. Hope to get more feedback. Cheers.
P.S I put together this site using everything I learned on the Kirupa site :hugegrin:

[sky_vault]

i would use a smaller weight version of the same font used for the logo to give it more consistent style ... other than the font issue it looks good to me :thumb:

[IMJ]

ah, much better now :)

[Tommy_S]

Oh well. I like it. But the logo and the word "menu" are blurred. That won't do. Please, mind it.

[safariwave]

Oh well. I like it. But the logo and the word "menu" are blurred. That won't do. Please, mind it.

How about now? Thanks everyone for your valuable input.

[Tommy_S]

safariwave, it's OK, now. Keep up the good work.

[safariwave]

Thanks guys. Should I keep the background white or do something else with it?

[Osman]

I couldn't send a message via contact form. Is is incomplete?

[safariwave]

Few bugs I have to work out. I do receive all messages but it does not take you to "Thank you for sending message" screen after hitting the submit button.