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fantim
February 9th, 2005, 12:22 PM
Wow it's been two years since my last critique. And I'm definatly still a newbie at flash. So tell me what you guys think.
http://www.fantim.org

e-sarbak
February 9th, 2005, 12:45 PM
It is alittle bit amateur like and definitely I didnt like the photo and the filter.
Also you should make a preloader and tween doesnt work really good...:)

DDD
February 9th, 2005, 01:35 PM
the site is lacking order and the nav is totally unreadable. The colors are a bit bizarre.

Also make your brand stick out more. It took a while for me to find it.

RabBell
February 9th, 2005, 01:40 PM
sites too big for the page

colours don't go

wrong fonts

no order

couldn't find the nav never mind use it

you're copyright says 2004 on it

front page looks pixelated

back to the drawing board :(

Tommy_S
February 9th, 2005, 02:22 PM
Whoops, what's that? Poor site, poor font, poor colors. You should improve upon this. Because now, it doens't look good. That's it.

fantim
February 9th, 2005, 02:51 PM
hahah ok ok i get the point thanks guys. Like I said I'm still a newbie at incorporating flash