working on a new website- critique please

[charlie_su1986]

Hi all,

I'm currently designing a new website for my school and just got started about a month ago. This is actually the second time for me making a flash website. Working pretty hard on this one :nerd:

Please take a look at what I've done so far, any suggestions/critiques/comments are highly appreciated ;)

ps.Sections other than Home are just there for testing preloader, it'll be take off as soon as i got those sections done.
http://members.shaw.ca/cs1986c/


the original website (http://www.cbe.ab.ca/b815) ... if you're interested...

Thanks a lot:)

[Insomniac]

Pretty nice, especially for only your 2nd website. Principle is spelt principal in the 'from the principle' section! For the button rollovers, I think you should set the hit area as the entire bar, and not just the part of the bar with the text. I'm not that keen on the font used for the titles. Finally, I think the transitions between sections are way too slow. Oh, just noticed, in the different sections, the colours on that white background look awful, is that the bit you haven't done yet?

Insomniac

[Napoly]

I don't like your CBE mail.. pls move to "contact us" section..
Other than that... it's a beautyful site..

[SlowRoasted]

love all the flash and animation but you have way too many colors in some sections, making it look very tacky, and there are a few too many fonts.

the blur on the main site preloader should be taken off too.

gj overall;)

[charlie_su1986]

Thank you all, the other crappy sections are just there to see if the preloader works or not(if you read it, the content is exactly the same as in Home)

Insomniac:
yes, i think i should change the clickable area of the buttons, and the title...."principle"

Napoly:
well, i don't like it either. But the rule is that it has to be on the home page, maybe i'll change that icon or put it in the mainmenu...

SlowRoasted:
the blur? do u mean that shadow around the preloader? perhaps i'll reduce the amount of it.

thanks a lot, and again, any suggestions/critiques/comments are very welcomed
:)

[Dj-Studios]

School info page has BAAAAD font color choice. It's not even readable.

EDIT: Nevermind I think it's every page that's like that.

[3d Nirvana]

lol yah, cant read yellow on white dude.

[charlie_su1986]

School info page has BAAAAD font color choice. It's not even readable.

EDIT: Nevermind I think it's every page that's like that.


lol yah, cant read yellow on white dude.

i said up there those sections are not done yet, it's just there to see if the preloader works or not :bad:
well sorry about my bad english...i just changed the wording of it :)