content (text help)

[Jasninder]

This is the sitemap of my store's website...all explained there, basically i need some text help (if possible) / comments and views on it

Dont move it on to showcase sector please :)

[G]

I think its a good sitemap but the font looks a little odd for that kind of thing, bit too 'futuristic' for that kind of thing. Apart from that looks like its a concise explanation about what and where stuff is on your site :)

[Jasninder]

wel thanks mrg...the font i have on pic is just for this pic..to lay it out in front of you guys...will have a different font on site ofcoz :)

[G]

good :)

[amitgeorge]

what ?


If you dont know what your strore is selling them who will know ?

..... services for cloth store ?..... maybe tailoring needs like myy shirt's button is broken and i can find the right color thread for it. ?


For downloads you can put in flash games....

[ditt0]

From my experience, Who and What should go together. People will come to the site to buy things, not to read . They usually buy from the internet cuz they are "lazy" (so they won't have patience to read much) or cuz they don't have too much time {so they won't read text again}. So a brief presentation should be enough.An online store, as well as a real store, is based on presenting the products mostly visually.
Other than that, the site map structure looks good.

[Jasninder]

Thanks Amit and Ditto,I am not making that site sell stuff online(not yet anyway) its basically informative site (not to mention fun:D, so that users come back over and over again) your right ditto i also think who and what should be single link, also agree on lesser text, infact that was the reason i asked for the help on text part...i need one pera..punch lines...something to attract..cool slangic stuff lik what should i put in who/what page....i am bit out of ideas..bit lost really on the whole thing...if i should design it first of put the text..maybe i should do the interface first( i always get this way whn doing personal work :( )