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Starpromo
August 12th, 2004, 12:31 PM
Okay so I started work on my 'Portfolio' the other day and I got to a point where I was like, yeah im happy with what ive got so far but how can I move on from here... Ive thought alot and have a few ideas but I would love the ideas of you KirupaKids to help me.
Here is what I have so far: FourLeaves (http://www.gromp.co.uk/fourleaves.jpg)
Feel free to say whats bad (and more importantly) whats good about what I have and what it needs.
Cheers.
:ear:
wanyo
August 12th, 2004, 12:38 PM
I like it, it's sleek and stylish. Perhaps it could use a litte color, but I'm sure you could do that with the other pages and stuff. Maybe give the logo a slight greenish tint, that might look good and add a bit of color without overdoing it. I'd really like to see it animated.
Starpromo
August 12th, 2004, 12:56 PM
Thanks Wanyo. I will try those things you have mentioned and get back with an updated version. I have other versions which have different colours.
I also forgot to warn people of my rather large face on it. Don't mean to alarm anyone :D. Hehe.
7thshadow
August 12th, 2004, 02:37 PM
hey S.P.-
your footer rocks!!! the site is looking nice and modern. I think that you should contenue your work as is. I like the plane/bland look, and on the point of focus there is a splash of color.
nice:
from, Blake
prstudio
August 12th, 2004, 02:46 PM
star- perhaps just a colored gradient in the background - perhaps a nice soft red?
looks very sleek so far :)
Ordinathorreur
August 12th, 2004, 03:45 PM
"Made in the U.K."
He He, I like it!
billystar
August 12th, 2004, 03:57 PM
i agree with the accent colour.... needs a dash to pull something out to the eye and it makes sense if its the logo...
the font is cool, but since i bought one form fonts for flash i could never go back...if you look at ure name its hard to read...
other than that, its a very promising start, your a man after my own heart with the white/minimalist look,
Billy
Digitalosophy
August 12th, 2004, 04:09 PM
Very Nice :)
Not sure if your good looking enough to be on the main page though ;) (j/k)
Only thing I'm not sure about is the border around the interface, it seems rather big. Now I'm on a real crappy computer right now, so maybe that's why it looks a little funny to me, Ill have to check when I get home.
But nice job I really like it.
Starpromo
August 12th, 2004, 04:49 PM
Thanks alot for the comments guys. Im working on the suggestions made. I tried making the logo more green earlier and it didn't look right but i am going to try again now to see if i can get different results.
Its funny someone mentioned the red gradient, because i tried a red one and it didn't look all the bad really.
Thanks again.
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