its not done, but open to suggestions!

[color_loser_pup]

click (http://wastedmux.babolohost.com/real_site.html)

i made that yesterday. does it remind you of

this? (http://www.ferryhalim.com/index2.htm)

[simplistik]

Yes, it does remind me of "this?".

IMO the opening animation is weak, the H thingy w/e it is, that has welcome in the middle doesn't make to much sense. Welcome is also to close to the borders of the middle part of that H which makes it look worse.

I think only your profile works, and when it loaded I saw some kind of funky shape tween... what was it? How is it relevant to the site?

Keep on truckin

[color_loser_pup]

yeah, i didnt finish it yet. i just wanted to see what to fix up before continuing it.

[REEF·]

Yea I agree with simplistik.

No offense, but I just sometimes can't stand animations that take that long to say welcome.

Only the navbar sort of resembles.

[color_loser_pup]

i thought it was pretty quick, originally the intro was supposed to last 70 frames, but i made it shorter. :mu:

[dru_nasty]

Do you want a critique on your rip? Or the latter?

[REEF·]

Do you want a critique on your rip? Or the latter?Lol.

[color_loser_pup]

heh..its just for practice, i read a thread by a member here that they have done mock-ups themselves!


Who cares if Ingo made a mock-up? It's a mock-up! I do mocks all the time. Just not whole sites. Mock-ups are for practice. 24-7media has a mock-up of nsync.com that I saw that they posted in their portfolio, once again all to practice...


i believe that The Reefster posted that :mu:

[REEF·]

Uh - okay? I didn't say your site was a rip ;).

Theres nothing ripped about it.

[Digitalosophy]

I think your animations take too much time to play and lag.

Also your navigation motion isn't smoothe. And of course it reminds me of "this" :)

[color_loser_pup]

how should i make it smooth? i put easing on the frames and everything, i dont know what else to do :(