New logo - MC

[hsadan]

I've done 2 logos for a Multimedia Club...
Need suggestions/critisms/which-one-is-better-answers

btw, in case u don't know, Multimedia deals with computer stuff and other high-tech thingys =)

[hsadan]

here's the second one

[eyeinfinitude]

I think both samples are a great start, but they both could use more work. They both have a lot of jagged edges. If I had to pick one out of the two then I would prefer the first one. I think it had more potential as a good logo. So work on the first one more. =)

[mdipi]

The second one looks like a header for a paper or something. i like the first one more though. But they do need a bit of refining.

[hsadan]

thx for the feedback...
yea, after much thought i too don't think the 2nd one signifies much.
the jaggedness came about when i converted it to gif (don't know why i did that). I made the logo in illustrator, u see.

well here it is in png format (the first one)

[c!rYx]

It's definitly a nice starting, but you have to do some more specials about it. Work with different colors and so on...

[hsadan]

oh..forgot to mention, i'm doing more of the designing part here. probably gonna get it printed on a t-shirt with a very tight budget, u see :sigh:
of course, u can always take the design of the logo and give it effects.