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Adam
May 24th, 2004, 02:51 AM
http://digitalink-designs.com/jd28.jpg

Outside of any little battles I've been in here....I've not really used PS...which is why I wanted to get involved with battle stuff....so I could learn..please feel free to give any comments and critiques on this...thanks :D

Adam

Adam
May 24th, 2004, 03:26 AM
Also, if you're interested...these are the pics I used:


http://digitalink-designs.com/allPics.jpg

talkshowhost
May 24th, 2004, 06:56 AM
Love it, Adam. Maybe the Jack Daniels is too bright though. Just a touch. ;) :thumb:

EZEkiel
May 24th, 2004, 07:22 AM
yeah the J.D and the house in the background might ned some toning down but other wise, nice work big fella !! :cheers:

:panda:E!kO:panda:

Adam
May 24th, 2004, 12:55 PM
Thanks guys...The JD bottle was the main focus, and the very frst pic I started with...I guess I over accaentuated it a bit....Doesn't look as bad in the psd file, still to bright though, exporting it made it stand out even more. Thanks for the feedback I really appreciate it :D

Adam

Dj-Studios
May 24th, 2004, 01:21 PM
It seems the Contrast is too high. It grainy in some areas. Other than that it's pretty good.

UNFLUX
May 24th, 2004, 01:23 PM
personally, I think you did a fantastic job! The only picture I can't find is the car, but it doesn't matter. I love this adam, good stuff :thumb:

Voetsjoeba
May 24th, 2004, 01:25 PM
Sweet ! Great combination of the pics :)

Adam
May 24th, 2004, 01:25 PM
Thanks Dj...can you tell me which spots look grainy to you?...I was going for that effect on the walls, but maybe it's too much?...or is there somewhere else that looks not so good?

Thanks again :)
Adam

talkshowhost
May 24th, 2004, 01:25 PM
Cool Adam. Have you got anything else to showcase? I like your style.


- Get me a John Daniels.
- You mean Jack Daniels?
- When you've known him for as long as...Hehehe. That's Al Pacino in Scent of a Woman.

Adam
May 24th, 2004, 01:30 PM
Thanks...Unlfux and Voets...wow, you gus were typing while I was responding to Dj...Unflux, the car is in the bg in front of the house..it's looks so much nicer and obvious, in the psd file. Thanks!! And Voets, thank you...the idea came from the fact that I have close to 60 empty JD bottles in my basement in hopes of one day building a bar out of them....well not totally out of bottles ;) I thought it might be cool to try to make a picture for behind the bar, the psd file is 8x10...Jack Daniels always give me that "old south" feel...Thanks both of you for your encouragement :D

Adam

Adam
May 24th, 2004, 01:34 PM
Cool Adam. Have you got anything else to showcase? I like your style.

Hehehe. That's Al Pacino in Scent of a Woman.
WHOOOWAAHH!!! Love that movie...thanks, TSH, no...this is actually my first attempt at PS outside of any tennis matches I've been in...any thing I've done is posted in the battle forum...well outside of this:


http://digitalink-designs.com/TarrahWillow2.gif

It's what the child would look like if my girlfriend slept with my dog.... :D

thanks again,
Adam

talkshowhost
May 24th, 2004, 01:38 PM
WHOOOWAAHH!!!
Fancy test driving that Ferrari, Adam? Lol

Woah, that pic is freaky... ;)

Adam
May 24th, 2004, 01:43 PM
yeah, g/f loved it too...wanted me to print it out so she could put it on the fireplace...lol

CanadianGuy
May 24th, 2004, 01:44 PM
Nice work Adam. I really like it. The perspective and lighting of everything is excellent (aside from the JD)

Adam
May 24th, 2004, 01:47 PM
Thanks CG, I used your tip on the lighting effects on nearly everything in the picture..and yeah, the JD...I was going to try to fix it, but in the final version of the psd file, I merged everything...don't ask me why...the version before that that I had saved doesn't have the chair in it :( I saved 21 versions of it along the way to make sure I didn't mess anything up...but not one is the finished version that I can work with...live and learn I guess....thanks again.

Adam

Dj-Studios
May 24th, 2004, 01:48 PM
Hey adam it's mostly on the dresser. See what I mean. The colors almost look washed out. I guess I shouldn't have said grainy. Although it is on the left wall. Shoulda said washed out instead ;). But do you see what I mean?

Adam
May 24th, 2004, 01:51 PM
Yeah, I had a hard time with the dresser...I wasn't totally happy with it when I did it, but due to my inexperience, I didn't know how to get it to look how I wanted...I'm gonna see if I can fix things up...and maybe take out some of the graininess on the wall too..thanks, Dj.

Adam

Dj-Studios
May 24th, 2004, 02:34 PM
No Problem buddeh. If you have any more questions you can probably catch me on AIM. I'd be happy to help ya in any way I can.