opinions/test work in progress

[m@aslanprojects]

Hi everyone, Im new here but been a member of DW/PS cafe forum for a while,
Im making an Interactive narrative in Flash, This is a small part of it, a pop up introduction to the story (the ugly git featured is me).
Opinions? tech issues?
>>> http://martin.aslanprojects.co.uk/message.html <<<
Thanks!!!

[fester8542]

Oh man!
My dog was watching it and he just went and commited suicide! :trout:

HA HA

Just kidding man. It was pretty creepy. Was there supposed to be audio with the text? I didnt hear any.

But its pretty cool.

[m@aslanprojects]

eerrr, thanks,
there isnt any audio, didnt want it to take forever to load.