plz help me improve my animation

[peveedotcom]

Hi,

I've made a small animation, to use as a logo or just as a place holder, and I was just wondering if anyone can give me some pointers on were to improve it/ were I might of gone wrong

www.sporadicmedia.com (http://www.sporadicmedia.com)

:) you have to click the box :P

[SeiferTim]

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:beam:

[peveedotcom]

hehe i edited the url now


woops :p

[SeiferTim]

Hmm.... have the borders stretch out wider, move the logo up to the top right or left, and shrink it down a little more. Do all that while the rest of the items that you want on the screen appear in a similar manner, one at a time, until you have a nice interface. I like that it's pretty quick, and smooth.

[peveedotcom]

thx

[SeiferTim]

I actually like the over-all design... the only thing I don't like is that the logo seems too light at times...
I like the background though, looks nice, and gives a bit of texture.... I haven't had much luck with textures myself, I usually tend to just use flat colors on my sites... perhaps I'll change that when I really start building my Worlds Site (http://worldsrpg.no-ip.com)... :D

[The_Vulcan]

Hey peveedotcom.

I see sp-media worked for you....

I agree with SeiferTim........
I think it looks really cool and sleek....
only the logo is a little light at times...

[peveedotcom]

Yeh I dont like the way the text dissapears kinda, i'lkl change it tommorow, thx anyway for you comments.

im off for an early nap

[RadioactveChimp]

Nice but I don't really like the clicky sound, major annoying!