www.theberenicehotel.tk

[Voodoo~Chile]

The only thing missing is the Audio...
Everything else's done (or at least I think they are for a while... he he)!

Any comments, suggestions or anything??? :beam:
Do you find it too :skull: :evil: scaaaary? he he

Thanks!

The Berenice Hotel (http://www.theberenicehotel.tk)

My previous thread was: http://www.kirupaforum.com/forums/showthread.php?s=&threadid=51538

[El_Thierro]

It looks nice, although it really needs some audio, and I'm not sure what the website is about :h:

[protagonist]

i'd guess it's about dark poems and stories ;)

i like it, great feel :thumb: :A+:

[Voodoo~Chile]

I'm working on the audio... I said it on the first line: "The only thing missing is the Audio..."
It's on its way! :)

Protagonist guessed correctly what the website's about! ;)

[webshocker]

Nice site man, very very dark :))))
keep the good work

[Flashmatazz]

Nice site, although not really my cup of tea I'm afraid.

Things I noticed:

- the font isn't crisp. I think you'll need to try and change that so the text becomes more ligible.

- transitions are a bit slow. maybe up the fps a bit

- the 'back' button in the poems section is located on a different spot than in the stories section. and maybe you could also make a transition when the back button is clicked.


just my 0.02 hope it helps