page check!!!

[Alex]

Tell me what you think. dont hold back if it is horriable please tell me. http://alex21212.tripod.com/About_Us.htm

i am 50% done with this page. i still need to add some more things.


Thanks!!

[pom]

Not much to comment unfortunately... But I like the colors! :beam:

[Kel - 420]

Hey,

Nice work. How about left justifying About Us text.
It looks strange it being in a column format with centered text.

[Alex]

thanks for the feedback.

i am going to be adding som more things there and i will upload it when that part of my site is done.

its only 10% done:(

[Alex]

any other comments??:beam:

[Kel - 420]

To be brutally honest with you I think you posted too early. You don’t appear to have done anything in the last 24hrs. If you work on it some more than post when you have quite a bit more content, I’m sure people will be glad to help [IMHO]. :-\

[Alex]

the page is done now. i think
please some one check it out and tell me how bad it is. the link is on the first post of this thread

thanks

[enyceexgloboi]

Hmm..
There seems to be not much difference 10% and 100%. IMO
It looks like just a BASIC layout with plain colors..

You should definitely add graphics, more content, bigger layout, menu , etc.

You're starting your page from about us., but you should have a main page with a menu - and from that menu you should point to about us. A Splash page will be nice too.


Overall there's not much content to comment on.
You just need to put some more time and effort into it.


:smirk:

[Alex]

thats only one page.... i am still working on all the other pages