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calhoonian
March 18th, 2004, 04:07 AM
first commercial site, i know it shouldn't all be in flash, but i wanted to create an entire site in flash. some of the portfolio is a bit on the large side but i'm working on it....

be gentle

http://www.iwantflyers.com

daedalus
March 18th, 2004, 08:54 AM
Hey wow cool site!
althought I am kind of a newbie.
(Check out my site too: www.netzknoten.net/)
I would do following things.

- u need preloaders..
i.e @ portfolio, when I click on a pic it needs a lot of time...
- either integrate the pricelist into the mainmovie or make them dowloadable in pdf.

calhoonian
March 18th, 2004, 11:17 AM
thanks for the response, i'm working on preloaders at the moment, the portfolio page especially is a bit on the large side.

the price pdfs are on there, maybe i need to make them clearer.

nice site by the way, i like the bubbles.

johnbruce
March 18th, 2004, 11:23 AM
reminds me of Vodafone for some reason :smirk:

joecastro
March 18th, 2004, 12:02 PM
Johnbruce stop spying on me! lol. umm try using pixel fonts for clean fonts. the text is a little blurry.

Klue
March 18th, 2004, 12:27 PM
Nice site, the only thing I would suggest, is to add some sounds to your buttons, ( Iam a sucker for that :sure: )

-Klue

vaguemedia
March 18th, 2004, 08:58 PM
Looks great. I really like the design, very simple and clean. very good.

I couldn't read the text. My screen resolution is 800 x 600. I had to zoom in.

Besides that, looks great.

minimalistik
March 19th, 2004, 02:04 AM
cool :).

sounds, music, button anaimation can be a suggestion and a preloader is essential

RadioactveChimp
March 19th, 2004, 02:44 AM
KInda stiff but i like it:)

calhoonian
March 19th, 2004, 03:49 AM
cheers for the feedback, still toying with the preloaders and the text......button sounds you say? hmmmm