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coreymose
January 12th, 2003, 01:32 PM
any comments on my site...

http://coreymose.net

eyeinfinitude
January 12th, 2003, 02:53 PM
wow that is a very cool navigation setup you have there and the overall layout is pretty clean.

The only suggestions I can offer is that maybe adding more color to the layout and instead of having a button that closes the menu completely, have it just slide back to the open menu state.

Also some samples of your work would be nice as well, I didn't see anything in your portfolio section.

Nice work overall, I look forward to seeing more of it. =)

Lynx
January 13th, 2003, 10:08 AM
clean, simple and nice :)

Kitiara
January 13th, 2003, 11:45 AM
I have to confess that it took me a couple of seconds when it first loaded to work out what was going on. I thought the green bar was a preloader or something. Duh... It's been a long day.

It's a very nice idea though, with the box moving over each icon. It's a bit overly green though, some more colour would be pleasing to the eye.

It also looked very small on my screen. I'm running at 1152 x 864 resoulution and there was a lot of empty space.

Sniggins
January 17th, 2003, 08:00 PM
Nice site Mose. Keep it up.

Sniggins

vip3r
January 17th, 2003, 08:22 PM
It seems a bit blank. Try adding a little more to it, instead of having it a bit too minamalistic.

coreymose
January 17th, 2003, 08:39 PM
Thanks for your comment, minimalism is what i was aiming for.

joeytomatoes
January 17th, 2003, 09:51 PM
Nice,just a little more different color is need on the green bar.Or maybe a little thinner.

jt

twig
January 19th, 2003, 04:43 PM
in my opinon i think that the 3D bars should be thiner if u do that and maybe add some more background or space animation it'll look great!!